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furyofantares ◴[] No.46269984[source]
Is it really too much to do a little more editing of the LLM output for the blog post? There's 17 numbered and titled section headings, all of which are linkable to with anchors, and which mostly have two sentences each.
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EmilStenstrom ◴[] No.46271037[source]
Hi! Yes, the headers were LLM generated and the text were not. I didn't want the blog post to go on for ages, so I just wrote a few lines under each heading. Any ideas how to make it better, while not being too long?
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1. furyofantares ◴[] No.46271891[source]
I'd start by deleting all the numbered section headings, and add either a transition word (then, so) or a transition sentence (why you went from step n to step n+1 or after how much time or whatnot).
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2. EmilStenstrom ◴[] No.46279234[source]
New iteration up. I kept the headings because they make the text easier to scan, but made them more descriptive. Added some transition words. Slight improvement I think.