The linked bill [1] is pretty short and readable, so I'd encourage people to actually check it out (since the EFF article doesn't even quote from it). If you want a diff view, the "Today's Law As Amended" tab [2] shows that.
[1] https://leginfo.legislature.ca.gov/faces/billNavClient.xhtml...
[2] https://leginfo.legislature.ca.gov/faces/billCompareClient.x...