It's just because he is white male looking isn't it, academia hates white men. Why are we over thinking this?
Personal statements like job apps are about bragging which is hard for anyone to do, the comments putting this down are piss poor.
Otherwise the comments are he shouldn't have written it as a normal 17 year old, he should have paid an experienced adult to faked it like everyone else. They could have helped him fake the "diversity" universities chase.
If universities wanted true diversity he is it. He's already worthy to have on their alumni which for the adults in the room, when all information is on your phone universities are the mostly connections you create . i.e. Gates, Wozniak , Jobs
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