There are some interesting ideas here but it feels like it's lacking a driving force pushing the game forward. It seems like the players can just keep rearranging their pieces in their own area refusing to engage and risk capture. Retreat seems to often be a sensible strategy.
Perhaps this is most similar to chess but in chess if your opponent just moves back and forth you can easily line up an unstoppable attack while they are messing around. It's unclear here how to avoid the situation where the opponents just dance around each other making sure they never get captured.
Could also compare to Stratego where there just isn't anywhere to retreat to, forcing players to engage.
Other abstracts like go and Othello are always adding pieces to the board so there's no way to stall or slow play the game.